After her mother and I both read this piece, she said that she just likes to match words that rhyme. The poet is in the third grade. She chose a red dry erase marker. And the shape of the words resembled a heart.
Relize
I look in your eyes and finally relize
That all I can see in you is me
I tug you close and then I find that
Only roses are in your mind I stroke
Your skin It feels so pure cause it
Feels softer than kittens fur
All I need to do is
Look in your eyes
Then I find
Everything I
Need to
Relize
I look in your eyes and finally relize
That all I can see in you is me
I tug you close and then I find that
Only roses are in your mind I stroke
Your skin It feels so pure cause it
Feels softer than kittens fur
All I need to do is
Look in your eyes
Then I find
Everything I
Need to
Relize
© 2009 Clare McShane
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Wow !that's beautiful, especially from a third grader.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you should put it to music !
Wow! A third grader! She has special talent. This is beautiful!
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Take care!
Beautiful, although I do wonder what she has been reading/watching at that age! I wrote this when I was eight.
ReplyDeleteThat is beautiful and so insightful for such a young age! It's sweet of you to share it.
ReplyDeleteDang! I love kids! The magic they can make for us hardened adults.
ReplyDeleteAngels among us
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. A future songwriter maybe?! :)
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